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		<title>By: Caroline Smailes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Caroline Smailes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Nov 2009 20:39:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lplate Author - thanks hun x

Beth - actually, it&#039;s May... something to read whilst in labour? :)

Liz - I dread to think of all the things I&#039;ve agreed to...
 
paul - good luck! That&#039;s great to hear that your agent is supporting you so much. I really and truly hope that it all goes well.

xxx</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lplate Author &#8211; thanks hun x</p>
<p>Beth &#8211; actually, it&#8217;s May&#8230; something to read whilst in labour? <img src='http://www.carolinesmailes.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Liz &#8211; I dread to think of all the things I&#8217;ve agreed to&#8230;</p>
<p>paul &#8211; good luck! That&#8217;s great to hear that your agent is supporting you so much. I really and truly hope that it all goes well.</p>
<p>xxx</p>
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		<title>By: paul</title>
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		<dc:creator>paul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 09 Nov 2009 08:29:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&quot;when my mind has to be stuck in a fictional world I am utterly distracted and a bit rubbish at hearing.&quot;

I recognise that feeling - and I&#039;m sure my family do too. The other side of it is that it&#039;s often difficult to write when you&#039;re not immersed in the world you&#039;ve created. It&#039;s hard to snatch a few minutes here and there, because it takes time to make that world real again in your mind - and it has to feel real if you want to write well.
I&#039;m editing the second book based on Agent comments - Don&#039;t you just love it when you realise that a one line comment about one character means changing umpteen chapters and keeping those changes consistent :o) - Particularly when you know they are right. Better get back to it - Hope all goes smoothly for you.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;when my mind has to be stuck in a fictional world I am utterly distracted and a bit rubbish at hearing.&#8221;</p>
<p>I recognise that feeling &#8211; and I&#8217;m sure my family do too. The other side of it is that it&#8217;s often difficult to write when you&#8217;re not immersed in the world you&#8217;ve created. It&#8217;s hard to snatch a few minutes here and there, because it takes time to make that world real again in your mind &#8211; and it has to feel real if you want to write well.<br />
I&#8217;m editing the second book based on Agent comments &#8211; Don&#8217;t you just love it when you realise that a one line comment about one character means changing umpteen chapters and keeping those changes consistent <img src='http://www.carolinesmailes.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_surprised.gif' alt=':o' class='wp-smiley' /> ) &#8211; Particularly when you know they are right. Better get back to it &#8211; Hope all goes smoothly for you.</p>
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		<title>By: liz</title>
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		<dc:creator>liz</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Nov 2009 04:47:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats on getting it all done and fascinating the need for three different types of editing.

I so get the when your in the book and agreeing to things..........

lx</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats on getting it all done and fascinating the need for three different types of editing.</p>
<p>I so get the when your in the book and agreeing to things&#8230;&#8230;&#8230;.</p>
<p>lx</p>
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		<title>By: uberVU - social comments</title>
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		<dc:creator>uberVU - social comments</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 07 Nov 2009 01:38:40 +0000</pubDate>
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This post was mentioned on Twitter by Caroline_S: A blog post about the process of editing &#039;Bees&#039; and ignoring my children http://bit.ly/1vdPO9...</description>
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<p>This post was mentioned on Twitter by Caroline_S: A blog post about the process of editing &#8216;Bees&#8217; and ignoring my children <a href="http://bit.ly/1vdPO9.." rel="nofollow">http://bit.ly/1vdPO9..</a>.</p>
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		<title>By: Beth</title>
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		<dc:creator>Beth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 19:20:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Why oh why oh why oh why is April still so far away??? I&#039;ll have to read fast to get your lovely book in before the baby arrives! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Why oh why oh why oh why is April still so far away??? I&#8217;ll have to read fast to get your lovely book in before the baby arrives! <img src='http://www.carolinesmailes.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Lplate Author</title>
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		<dc:creator>Lplate Author</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 18:31:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well done chick, after a very long time, I still knew you&#039;d do it! xx</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done chick, after a very long time, I still knew you&#8217;d do it! xx</p>
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		<title>By: Caroline Smailes</title>
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		<dc:creator>Caroline Smailes</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 17:19:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>zehra mustafa - thanks for your comment and good luck :)

Juxtabook - oh it&#039;s all too familiar! I recently sent professional feedback to a team of examiners and included several &#039;I love you&#039; notes, in pink writing and with pink hearts all over them! :)  Working from home has so many positive aspects to it, but sometimes it is difficult to switch off.

Debs - so true, drinks and choc for tomorrow night.

xxxx</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>zehra mustafa &#8211; thanks for your comment and good luck <img src='http://www.carolinesmailes.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>Juxtabook &#8211; oh it&#8217;s all too familiar! I recently sent professional feedback to a team of examiners and included several &#8216;I love you&#8217; notes, in pink writing and with pink hearts all over them! <img src='http://www.carolinesmailes.co.uk/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />   Working from home has so many positive aspects to it, but sometimes it is difficult to switch off.</p>
<p>Debs &#8211; so true, drinks and choc for tomorrow night.</p>
<p>xxxx</p>
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		<title>By: Debs carr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Debs carr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 17:09:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great news, and just in time for the weekend.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great news, and just in time for the weekend.</p>
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		<title>By: Juxtabook</title>
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		<dc:creator>Juxtabook</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 10:28:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I know what you mean about trying to work around your children/child. I get, &quot;Mummy you&#039;re not really listening are you?&quot; all the time. It is stressful for you and for them and is the downside of working from home. The upside is that you&#039;re at home at all. I am sure my child has her input though. I can&#039;t believe that I haven&#039;t posted one of her drawings or notes, shoved onto my work to get attention, in with one of my book parcels. I just hope customers smile!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know what you mean about trying to work around your children/child. I get, &#8220;Mummy you&#8217;re not really listening are you?&#8221; all the time. It is stressful for you and for them and is the downside of working from home. The upside is that you&#8217;re at home at all. I am sure my child has her input though. I can&#8217;t believe that I haven&#8217;t posted one of her drawings or notes, shoved onto my work to get attention, in with one of my book parcels. I just hope customers smile!</p>
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		<title>By: zehra mustafa</title>
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		<dc:creator>zehra mustafa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 06 Nov 2009 10:27:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you for this post, it&#039;s much needed, especially since I am editing my first book, yet again, it&#039;s nearly ready for the world and your words helped to ease the pain. So thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for this post, it&#8217;s much needed, especially since I am editing my first book, yet again, it&#8217;s nearly ready for the world and your words helped to ease the pain. So thank you!</p>
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